Evaluation



I have made sure that my articles links to the brief as I firstly made sure that I my article targeted teenagers as Culture East is aimed for teenagers. My adaptations were for two different target audiences which were, for adults and for government governors. I have used pull quotes, big letters for the first letter on the article. I have used relevant images at the right of my page. In the example above I used an interview for my article, where I explain that Culture East is having a composition for people to explain their story of youth clubs closing down and how they felt. I also used a link at the end for the consumer to interact with petitions online.

I feel that there wasn't anything else to include as I used a lot of content that a DPS normally consist of. I feel that my article explained how much the boy feels about the youth clubs closing down and how it affects his youth. I also felt that this relates to my plan as I wanted to talk about the youth in East London.

My first draft, I talked too much about the boys feelings as if I was writing an english assessment. So I shortened it down and made it enough for consumers to understand.





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  1. media27 June 2017 at 11:49

    2B.M6 (Merit) you have demonstrated competency in storing written digital material

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