This is a well written evaluation Desiree in which you think carefully about how well you met the intentions of the brief, and you discuss strengths and weaknesses throughout the process. You could be clearer on editing, and you could have discussed what you thought about the audience feedback. Vanessa
This is a well written evaluation Desiree in which you think carefully about how well you met the intentions of the brief, and you discuss strengths and weaknesses throughout the process. You could be clearer on editing, and you could have discussed what you thought about the audience feedback. Vanessa
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You have addressed most of my comments above and made some thoughtful improvements.
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