500 words 5.1 Advertisements that are suitable for older children but could distress younger children must be sensitively scheduled. Our campaign will be using offensive words that isn’t suitable for children therefore it will be aired after 9pm, when children will be sleeping.The campaign will not be viewed on children’s channels because it could distress children. This campaign is aimed for teenagers and above because it is an educational advert that will be showing the audience how wrong bullying is. 5.2 Advertisements must not condone, encourage or unreasonably feature behavior that could be dangerous for children to emulate. Advertisements must not implicitly or explicitly discredit established safety guidelines. Advertisements must not condone, encourage or feature children going off alone or with strangers. This rule is not intended to prevent advertisements that inform children about dangers or risks associated with potentially harmful behavior. There won’t be any r...
This is a well written evaluation Desiree in which you think carefully about how well you met the intentions of the brief, and you discuss strengths and weaknesses throughout the process. You could be clearer on editing, and you could have discussed what you thought about the audience feedback. Vanessa
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You have addressed most of my comments above and made some thoughtful improvements.
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