You are clear on the techniques used but you haven't written a full enough analysis. You also needed to consider the mode of address, and the messages and values. Use the brief! Vanessa
This is my new improved piece of Task 1c I have used the colour Blue for work that I have added on. I have highlighted the key terms in Yellow. This is my first draft of Task 1c.
You are clear on the techniques used but you haven't written a full enough analysis. You also needed to consider the mode of address, and the messages and values. Use the brief! Vanessa
ReplyDeleteI have made some changes in blue and purple.
ReplyDeleteOK but you haven't addressed the comments above. Vanessa
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